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poemTitle: | Lake Vaso |
poemDetails: | Skies falling, upon the ragged heart pasquil
Tranquility ripples across the lake in plethora
She is there, in my heart, a sweet delusion
As I cross the waters wishing I was omnipotent
I drop my oars on forest floor, seeking Aurore
I run along the earth clad pathways towards the cloister
Praying that accrued love still has her beholden
Kneeling on one knee, I look up with a glint of promise
The Lantern reflects back the softness of her eyes |
poemNote: | This is my first Lanterne poem, I studied the form rigorously, however I did have a problem with one line, and Tim was gracious enough to help out. I must say He’s a genius! And who else other than me is qualified to know that? Let’s make poetry great again!!!! |
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poemDateCreated: | 4/30/2018 | |