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Lake Vaso

Skies falling, upon the ragged heart pasquil
Tranquility ripples across the lake in plethora
She is there, in my heart, a sweet delusion
As I cross the waters wishing I was omnipotent
I drop my oars on forest floor, seeking Aurore
I run along the earth clad pathways towards the cloister
Praying that accrued love still has her beholden
Kneeling on one knee, I look up with a glint of promise


The Lantern reflects back the softness of her eyes
This is my first Lanterne poem, I studied the form rigorously, however I did have a problem with one line, and Tim was gracious enough to help out. I must say He’s a genius! And who else other than me is qualified to know that? Let’s make poetry great again!!!!






























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poemTitle:Lake Vaso
poemDetails:Skies falling, upon the ragged heart pasquil Tranquility ripples across the lake in plethora She is there, in my heart, a sweet delusion As I cross the waters wishing I was omnipotent I drop my oars on forest floor, seeking Aurore I run along the earth clad pathways towards the cloister Praying that accrued love still has her beholden Kneeling on one knee, I look up with a glint of promise The Lantern reflects back the softness of her eyes
poemNote:This is my first Lanterne poem, I studied the form rigorously, however I did have a problem with one line, and Tim was gracious enough to help out. I must say He’s a genius! And who else other than me is qualified to know that? Let’s make poetry great again!!!!
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poemDateCreated:4/30/2018